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<blockquote data-quote="JACKG" data-source="post: 915515" data-attributes="member: 3071"><p>Firstly well good start and it’s better than I can do.</p><p></p><p>Only listened once on iPhone but here’s my initial thoughts</p><p></p><p>Too much goin on at the start.. would be better to build it more, eg the percussion or piano rather than everything including the vocal all at once. Let the track grow</p><p></p><p>I liked the strings n piano.</p><p></p><p>The shelter vocal sounded out of key, a bit high pitched</p><p></p><p>The you dream of heaven from collapse vocal is fine but I would use more sparingly and not overlap it over over vocals, wasn’t too keen on that loop either. I’d possibly put a few more snippets from the collapse pella </p><p></p><p>The other vocal sample worked very well</p><p></p><p>Would be interested to see how it turns out.. is going somewhere but I’m not quite sure where - defo has potential to be a nice tune though<img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p></p><p>Iv tried to be honest and just cos I said it don’t mean it’s right.. </p><p></p><p>Well done n hopefully u will get some more feedback.. prob be have to be patient as if live DJ on most will respect that n wait to a time the auto dj is on to listen<img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p></p><p>Welcome to OSA <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="JACKG, post: 915515, member: 3071"] Firstly well good start and it’s better than I can do. Only listened once on iPhone but here’s my initial thoughts Too much goin on at the start.. would be better to build it more, eg the percussion or piano rather than everything including the vocal all at once. Let the track grow I liked the strings n piano. The shelter vocal sounded out of key, a bit high pitched The you dream of heaven from collapse vocal is fine but I would use more sparingly and not overlap it over over vocals, wasn’t too keen on that loop either. I’d possibly put a few more snippets from the collapse pella The other vocal sample worked very well Would be interested to see how it turns out.. is going somewhere but I’m not quite sure where - defo has potential to be a nice tune though:) Iv tried to be honest and just cos I said it don’t mean it’s right.. Well done n hopefully u will get some more feedback.. prob be have to be patient as if live DJ on most will respect that n wait to a time the auto dj is on to listen:) Welcome to OSA :) [/QUOTE]
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